'Kyoto'

Updated: Dec 1, 2020



This extract is from a composition written by a user of English as a second language. Work of this kind will be returned to the student with comments and suggestions for further improvement as requested.


Edited Extract


March to April is our spring season. If you come to Kyoto during this season, you can see beautiful cherry blossoms. The weather is not hot and not too cold, but there are many tourists who come from foreign countries and the shops are very crowded. On the other hand, from October to November is our autumn season. If you come here during this season, you can see the autumn leaves. It is very beautiful and the trees are lit up at night.




Original Extract


March to April is our spring season. If you come to Kyoto in this season, you can see a beautiful cherryblossom. The weather is not hot and not too cold, but there are many tourists who came foreign countries and shops are very crowded. On the other hand, October to November is our Autumn season. If you come to here this season, you can also see autumn leaves. It is very beautiful and its lighted up in the night.

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