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Edited Extract
Colombia is a beautiful country where there are [unclear] places to visit. As an example, Cartagena is a beautiful city. The most popular time to come is in January because the weather is very nice in summer. It is very hot, the sea is beautiful and the beaches are wide and spacious, ...
Original Extract
Colombia is beautiful country she has [unclear] places, in this case Cartagena is a beautiful city, the most popular time to come is January because is sommer the weather is very nice. Is very hot, the sea is beautiful and the beach is very big, ...